Tinker Posted October 15, 2022 Share Posted October 15, 2022 October Reflection It should have burned off by now, the morning fog stretches past noon. A heavy, damp coverlet, chills the earth and slakes the thirst of a last green leaf before its full emmersion into Autumn's withering fall. The wet ground already covered with corpses of Spring's foilage, in orange, red and gold. They've let go of past worries and sleep in full glory.. Another cycle of life passing through, and I too shed the past and look forward to a rest before beginning all over again. ~~Judi Van Gorder 1 Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted October 16, 2022 Share Posted October 16, 2022 Hi Tink, I like the way this one sees Autumn as a season in one of many cycles in the narrator's life, a season just beginning in the Earth's annual cycle but also beginning for the speaker. Thanks, - David 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted October 30, 2022 Share Posted October 30, 2022 Judi, there's lots of good stuff in this. The evocative title "October Reflection" does double-duty in the sense that the poem is a reflection/musing while the scenery depicted seems to reflect what's around; I picture a bit of wetness gleaming on the ground beneath/under the fallen leaves. "Autumns withering fall" is especially memorable. Nice work! Tony 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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