Eternity

[Assaf1981]

Tall, winged men

Shout their salutations

Towards me personally,

In a city

Peaceful and beautiful;

Where I’ll find

Only eternal monotony!

 

[David W. Parsley]

Greetings, Assaf, and welcome to the forum.  With its unusual surrealism and irony, this reminds me of the poetry of Stephen Crane.  After the highly original opening lines, I find the final two less satisfying.  Might I request something more open-ended?

Thanks,
- David

[Assaf1981]

3 minutes ago, David W. Parsley said:

Greetings, Assaf, and welcome to the forum.  With its unusual surrealism and irony, this reminds me of the poetry of Stephen Crane.  After the highly original opening lines, I find the final two less satisfying.  Might I request something more open-ended?

Thanks,
- David

I did this as a nod to atheism. And I am not an atheist.