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Assaf1981

Tall, winged men

Shout their salutations

Towards me personally,

In a city

Peaceful and beautiful;

Where I’ll find

Only eternal monotony!

 

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David W. Parsley

Greetings, Assaf, and welcome to the forum.  With its unusual surrealism and irony, this reminds me of the poetry of Stephen Crane.  After the highly original opening lines, I find the final two less satisfying.  Might I request something more open-ended?

Thanks,
- David

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3 minutes ago, David W. Parsley said:

Greetings, Assaf, and welcome to the forum.  With its unusual surrealism and irony, this reminds me of the poetry of Stephen Crane.  After the highly original opening lines, I find the final two less satisfying.  Might I request something more open-ended?

Thanks,
- David

I did this as a nod to atheism. And I am not an atheist.

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