tonyv Posted October 30, 2022 Share Posted October 30, 2022 I lost her somewhere, that ennui de la nuit, the snow becoming rain becoming snow, there never was a way or a way out. Like starlight during day--daylight at night-- she's anywhere, and everywhere, but here. 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted October 30, 2022 Share Posted October 30, 2022 Enjoyed the fluidity Tony. Closure is so elusive! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted October 30, 2022 Author Share Posted October 30, 2022 Thank you, Phil. It's just a mood piece. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted October 30, 2022 Share Posted October 30, 2022 just? A mood piece retains a purity. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted November 27, 2022 Author Share Posted November 27, 2022 On 10/30/2022 at 10:26 AM, badger11 said: just? A mood piece retains a purity. Thank you, Phil. I think this one's coming close to full circle. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assaf1981 Posted November 27, 2022 Share Posted November 27, 2022 I could feel the emotion, the sense of loss... Good job! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 17, 2022 Author Share Posted December 17, 2022 On 11/27/2022 at 2:03 PM, Assaf1981 said: I could feel the emotion, the sense of loss... You got that. Thank you, Assaf1981. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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