tonyv Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 I lost her somewhere, that ennui de la nuit, the snow becoming rain becoming snow, there never was a way or a way out. Like starlight during day--daylight at night-- she's anywhere, and everywhere, but here. 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
badger11 Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 Enjoyed the fluidity Tony. Closure is so elusive! 1 Quote
tonyv Posted October 30, 2022 Author Posted October 30, 2022 Thank you, Phil. It's just a mood piece. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
badger11 Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 just? A mood piece retains a purity. 1 Quote
tonyv Posted November 27, 2022 Author Posted November 27, 2022 On 10/30/2022 at 10:26 AM, badger11 said: just? A mood piece retains a purity. Thank you, Phil. I think this one's coming close to full circle. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Assaf1981 Posted November 27, 2022 Posted November 27, 2022 I could feel the emotion, the sense of loss... Good job! 1 Quote
tonyv Posted December 17, 2022 Author Posted December 17, 2022 On 11/27/2022 at 2:03 PM, Assaf1981 said: I could feel the emotion, the sense of loss... You got that. Thank you, Assaf1981. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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