JTParreira Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 After the violin snatch the public they began playing the fingers one another until the bottom of the hands The woman said yes with a left hand and a right hand of him is imprisoned maybe forever. J.T.Parreira Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 Joao, I picture two concert violinists -- a man and a woman. Perhaps they are lovers, perhaps their concert is a metaphor for an act of love. As always, I enjoy your sparse, image-rich poems. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Tony has said it all- on the other hand (Good grief where does the grammarian reside?;-) ) After the violin snatch the public they began playing the fingers feels awkward- After the violin snatch in public, they play the fingers? Loved the short well imaged form, but my reading skipped, and spun on little details in the flow ;-) Much Grace! DC Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 14, 2009 Share Posted June 14, 2009 Lovely poem Joao. It gives a scene of sharing rings for marriage. The violin gives wonderful sound and makes this poem so musical. I love it. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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