Tinker Posted January 1, 2023 Share Posted January 1, 2023 Welcome the New Year While this last year prepares to leave, it's Happy, Happy New Year's Eve. Let go of past endeavours failed, they're done, can't change, that ship has sailed. A new day dawns with hope entailed. Goodbye to 2022, Hail 2023, brand new! So raise a glass in gratitude for lessons, blessings and latitude the months gone by have given you. Embrace the good, seek wisdom due from all the rest, a heady brew. Goodbye to 2022, Hail 2023, brand new! ~~Judi Van Gorder Verse Form: Sevenelle 1 Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted February 9, 2023 Share Posted February 9, 2023 I can see that the structure is 3-2-2 in rhyme scheme in 8 syllables and the last couplet in 9 syllables. Did I get the structure right, Judi? Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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