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Tormenting Thoughts


Assaf1981

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What is your wife doing?

You don’t know.

 

What is your husband doing?

You don’t know.

 

What are your parents doing?

You don’t know.

 

What are your kids doing?

You don’t know.

 

What are your relatives doing?

You don’t know.

 

What are your friends doing?

You don’t know.

 

What is your boyfriend doing?

You don’t know.

 

What is your girlfriend doing?

You don’t know.

 

These thoughts plague:

Every NFL player,

Every NHL player,

Every NBA player,

Every boxer,

Every pro wrestler,

Every performer,

Every trucker,

Every itinerant preacher,

Every explorer,

Every sailor,

Every soldier,

Every airman,

Every pilot,

Every flight attendant,

Every missionary,

And everyone else

Who works on

The road,

Travelling constantly.

 

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Hi Assaff,   I liked the repetition in this.  I have to say, I probably not included so many questions, all pretty much the same question.  Walt Whitman quote:  "Condense, condense, condense."  Condensing provides more power.  

~~Tink

 

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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10 minutes ago, Tinker said:

Hi Assaff,   I liked the repetition in this.  I have to say, I probably not included so many questions, all pretty much the same question.  Walt Whitman quote:  "Condense, condense, condense."  Condensing provides more power.  

~~Tink

 

Same question, but different characters.

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