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The "It's Over Now" Haiku

Were I not the one
you always dreamed of you
would not be crying

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Wow Tony,  Ouch that hurts. You begin with a gem.    

I am so happy to see you jump in.  I look forward to reading more.

~~Judi

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~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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That's kinda amazing. Breaks the subject tradition of haiku in the most delightful, insightful way. Hella 😊

 

J

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Thank you, Judi!

On 4/1/2023 at 7:06 PM, Tinker said:

Wow Tony,  Ouch that hurts.

Yes, I can't seem to get away from that.

Tony

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