incantation Posted May 5, 2023 Share Posted May 5, 2023 Test the confluence of Consciousnesses with bird Song. Symbol of a cross, Is he the guest of Another race who mine The material of dreams, A man who Both drowns and rises At the same time from Quantum streams. Intimate about autumn Winds praying at Cemetery gates for immortality. Does the earth sleep And roar in the lion's dream For it's reflection to be restored. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted May 7, 2023 Share Posted May 7, 2023 Hi Barry, As usual you offer mind-boggling imagery, uniquely you. On 5/5/2023 at 10:45 AM, incantation said: Is he the guest of Another race who mine The material of dreams, This is my favorite part, but admittedly it took me a couple reads, I think because of the Caps at the beginning of each line. Normally I just ignore that. You do it all of the time as do many. It is a preference. But, on this image I kept stumbling, the Cap on "The" had me stopping there which messed with the rhythm and meaning in the image. Just thinking out loud. Anyway, this image just opened so many other thoughts. It is really lovely. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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