Tinker Posted June 2, 2023 Share Posted June 2, 2023 The Sierras and the PacificPart I The Sierras call In the east the mountains rise, rocky and steep, with craggy boulders that one must scramble or leap.Evergreens stand sentinel Prepared for snow, their branches reach down with glossy green needles, from base to crownWildlife abounds Squirrels scurry, coyote stalk, black bears roam, a young buck rubs a tree to shed his velvet loam.Seasonal paradise Ski races, skating on ice, lounge by a fire, best winter sport, splash in the summer lakes, ride a horse, or hike in shorts. The Sierras call.Part II Sirens of the Pacific Lazily stroll barefoot on the warm wet sandy shore with toes tickled by foam, and listen to the ocean roar.Madrones, on guard Sculptured by the wind these red trees bend east, knarled driftwood and seaweed add to the visual feastBounty of the sea In the ocean’s depth reside creatures enormous and tiny, some cling to rocks, some swim deep, and some are briny.Year-round action Bikini or wetsuit, surfing, kayaking, sunbathing or fishing, and best of all, a bonfire on the beach and moonlight kissing. Sirens of the Pacific. ~~Judi Van Gorder Verse Form: Sidewalk Poem a la Gervic Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted June 3, 2023 Share Posted June 3, 2023 Very much enjoyed the parallels Judi. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted June 3, 2023 Author Share Posted June 3, 2023 Thanks Phil, chasing a form. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted June 3, 2023 Share Posted June 3, 2023 And successfully so! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted June 3, 2023 Author Share Posted June 3, 2023 Note: It's a 5 1/2 hour drive between the Pacific and the Sierras (the beauty of living in California) and I live between them, closer to the Pacific (15 min drive) but have in my youth lived in the Sierras. I've experienced everything in the poem except kayaking. There are 2 kayaks sitting out in my horse pasture right now. Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted June 4, 2023 Share Posted June 4, 2023 Pleasing rhymes and rhythms to frame this lovely contrast, Judi. P.S. I can see the kayaks resting upside down in the horse pasture, too! 😉 - David 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted June 4, 2023 Author Share Posted June 4, 2023 Thanks Dave, Exactly, they are upside down right next to the frontage gate. They were my tenant's and he was getting rid of them and I just couldn't let that happen. Adventure calls but I think I'll wait for my son to give it a try. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry A Posted June 5, 2023 Share Posted June 5, 2023 This would be a beautiful poem to place in a travel brochure. Especially liked the lines, "Lazily stroll barefoot on the warm wet sandy shore with toes tickled by foam and listen to the ocean roar". The imagery gives life to what you describe. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted June 5, 2023 Author Share Posted June 5, 2023 Thanks Terry, And yes the ocean, especially here in the north is definitely "alive". ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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