incantation Posted June 7, 2023 Share Posted June 7, 2023 I ran with the conquering Flames of Jamie fraser. Scottish rivers sang The names of an Ancient clan, my Celtic ancestry. I have seen final light Of day reflected on wings Arrive in closing eyes of Spring, my dreams have Risen with Scotland's Drowning skies Where I placed my Hands on Celtic moons And laid flowers before graves Were present, experienced The sounds ascent Of wave against wave In battle. My time traveling Reflections appeared on Lochs and rivers. I collected Tears of war on a mirror, that Wouldn't dissolve. Faces of casualties appeared In the glass unable to resolve Their status or gage the mass Of water, tears could have Been oceans. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted June 8, 2023 Share Posted June 8, 2023 Barry, I can hear the bagpipes crying. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry A Posted June 8, 2023 Share Posted June 8, 2023 Multidimensional, alive, as though you allow the reader to travel with you, shifting one reality to another and then imbuing it with vitality and intensity so that it cannot be considered dream-like. Quite an achievement. Poems such as this, mark a departure from the surrealism of past, in that there is no doubt of the reality you evoke, it is not clever play of words, it is the past alive. And did such people as the Outlander exist? Maybe they still do, just beyond the lines we take as objective reality. For the limiting of possibility is behind every stinking effort to keep mankind "in their place". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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