Terry A Posted June 12, 2023 Share Posted June 12, 2023 Misplaced in Time My love hovered over a shipwreck while the sun lifted water from a damaged earth; on shore the sands shifted on water, land was never what it seemed. Your cool streams enfolded desire in swirls of debris, piled up firewood in the drift world of dreams; bringing the angels weary of barriers, in the fathomless sympathy of what ending really means. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted June 14, 2023 Share Posted June 14, 2023 Enjoyed S1 Terry. Is there an option to use flotsam in S2? Bw Phil Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry A Posted June 14, 2023 Author Share Posted June 14, 2023 Yes! but I think the word fits more (sound and sense) in S3- bringing the angels weary of flotsam, in the fathomless sympathy of what ending really means. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted July 3, 2023 Share Posted July 3, 2023 Hi Terry. I don't know how I missed this earlier, I would have thought it just fine with "flotsam" but badge has a better eye than me. The change to "barriers" made it more relatable. This is really nice writing. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry A Posted July 3, 2023 Author Share Posted July 3, 2023 And thank you Tinker! Good to see you out and about. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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