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Lest someone to know,
To predict or to doubt.
Lest the criers of the heart
Be heard.

Lest the prey sees
 the cobweb or the
Bird smells the
Loaded gun through
The fierce wind,

The poison in the bread-
The sneaky rat-the mildewed
A cat's gaze - a Bird's wings,
shipwreck - Million feathers
" 'tis all fate " said they.

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Now you are writing poetry. Some very good imagery, and condensed, unnecessary verbiage eliminated. No moralizing. Showing not telling, not spelling your theme out through tedious detail. The makings of a poet.


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