Omar Posted July 3, 2023 Share Posted July 3, 2023 My faith is but a doubt, but a pondering Through the midnights. Through the altering Sunrise, A Floscule of the moon in the mid Of a noontide sky. Bits of pensiveness, Vacillated tides, An instant of recognizing The shifting sands. My faith is but a buzz Of a unidentified fly, I try to mute it-killing But every time it flutters Lurkingly within the ribs of my mind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted December 30, 2023 Share Posted December 30, 2023 Obviously I am way behind, I didn't realize my hiatus was this long. I promise I am in catch-up mode. Hi Omar, Hope you haven't left us, I find this piece quite intriguing because of the imagery you use. "altering Sunrise" "moon in the mid of a noontide sky" and "ribs of my mind". Ah poetry, it speaks a different language. Nice one. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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