Terry A Posted July 20, 2023 Posted July 20, 2023 You- who seemed to never care about left behind memories or the tearful faces that just one generation would erase. You- who did love and hate in grand equal measure counting truth of some value in air losing its fog its smoke its senseless flogging of dead horses The poignant moments of such utter compensation one would walk through all the garbage for just one revelation where grandness and possibility rode high the horizon. 1 Quote
badger11 Posted July 21, 2023 Posted July 21, 2023 I have some mental fog on this one Terry. Someone who was insensitive to the consequences of behaviours on others? Quote
Terry A Posted July 22, 2023 Author Posted July 22, 2023 Not at all. I’ll put this poem away for now. Might work better for understanding in a group of poems. Quote
badger11 Posted July 22, 2023 Posted July 22, 2023 So someone who doesn't care for reputation (short lived anyway). Someone who honours and pursues truth, gives unfettered expression to truth, because the cost is nothing compared to the reward. All for the 'poignant moment'. Getting closer? Quote
Terry A Posted July 23, 2023 Author Posted July 23, 2023 Yes! It's the moment experienced when something said rings like a bell, reverberating to every cell. The clear voice in a room of mumbling. The taste of a season's first ripe strawberry still in the sun. The true laughter when humour is right on the mark and shared on every level. There's nothing cardboard about truth, it's real, vital and often..........as this poem hints............very impatient with fools. As for legacy.....truth holds in all time and so little concern with short-term. Thank you Phil for rereading and your comments! 1 Quote
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