Lubbo Posted December 23, 2023 Share Posted December 23, 2023 because some stars are bright, some dim light breeze can grow into a wind because hard stone might break and spill rough waves may raid the sea of peace because you hear both truth and lies love may be outgrown by deep spite because sheer bliss might change to blight heartbeat may stop and make you die somebody prays to god somebody fights the odds somebody hides and cries somebody flies then dies and you run to the sun shining for billions of years taking the night and fears away warming you up by day gliding in the sky to show you the way Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 23, 2023 Share Posted December 23, 2023 Well composed, so much so that this could be used in an EDM track. Very vocal trance-like. I also like that you included the image in the topic Welcome to the forum, Lubbo. I’m excited that you’ve joined. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lubbo Posted December 24, 2023 Author Share Posted December 24, 2023 Thank you for the welcome and encouraging response. You have a good guess, it has something to do with music, it's sort of my philosophical ballad I sing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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