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you run to the sun


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because some stars are bright, some dim
light breeze can grow into a wind
because hard stone might break and spill
rough waves may raid the sea of peace
because you hear both truth and lies
love may be outgrown by deep spite
because sheer bliss might change to blight
heartbeat may stop and make you die

somebody prays to god
somebody fights the odds
somebody hides and cries
somebody flies then dies

and you run to the sun
shining for billions of years
taking the night and fears away
warming you up by day
gliding in the sky to show you the way


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Well composed, so much so that this could be used in an EDM track. Very vocal trance-like. I also like that you included the image in the topic  

Welcome to the forum, Lubbo. I’m excited that you’ve joined. 


Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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Thank you for the welcome and encouraging response. You have a good guess, it has something to do with music, it's  sort of my philosophical ballad I sing.

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