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where are the moments with the wind rushing through the hometown day in day out?
it always turned frisky when blowing your blonde hair about
I feel like it´s gliding over the morning grass while getting a blonde scent
like a black coffee with bright sunrise I long to meet you there again


meet up there, where the busy main street made the world´s tempting stage
at the secret place behind the school to recall the first wine and cigarette
there, where the air was rippling with an enigmatic thrill and hope
where stars reaching talks made the promises to stay together grow


I´m walking around the home town with mind full of playful summer

until I find there´s neither the frisky wind, nor your laughter

the same old bell is ringing on the tower of then colourful dreams

it sounds like a grave story stirring up chilling fears

I´m staring at your pictures in search for the blond hair still in vain

will never put up with it turned dark if I spot a sad look on your face







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Thank you for your comment. Yes, and as in this case, it's better to fail.

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Hi Lubbo,  This is the first I've read of your work and found it enticing.  And a belated Welcome to PMO. 

 Your piece reads rhythmically and pulls me forward at pretty fast pace for such long lines.  There is an urgency and excitement at first and yet it slows to almost a dirge at the end.  Skilled technique, interesting content, I look forward to reading more.


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Thank you kindly for the positive comment and a brief expertise which motivates me to continue with writing.

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