Terry A Posted March 28 Posted March 28 Maps of the centuries, water-stained, some unreadable missing charts missing timelines. The map of the last hundred years wears mended clothes with seams undone, patches, broken zippers stains of blood, war, and tears frightening spectres hanging over hills soiled with grime, lost years, fingerprints fading with each turn of the gyre. Earth wears its scars with equanimity, naturally allows beauty in time to cover over, grow greenery, even the sands mould themselves into pleasing wind shapes. Earth accepts its bodies to compost, lets thoughts stream off to forming galaxies and stars coming of all the children not yet born into all the fragments of our trying. Always there are hands reaching to gather all the tattered threads make better or forever let go….. We do not know anymore, the certainty of where goes our volatile world. Quote
David W. Parsley Posted April 28 Posted April 28 On 3/28/2024 at 7:57 AM, Terry A said: ... the children not yet born into all the fragments of our trying. ... Terry, I was particularly taken with these lines. Good time to use the word "all" for many reasons, not least of which is the music running through children-not-born-all-our. Thanks, - David Quote
Terry A Posted April 29 Author Posted April 29 Thank you. Too many -ing words again, it is a hard habit word-wise for me to change. On another note, please say something about your 'eclipse' experience. (Or share a poem?!) Where I am we only had 23 percent, but even at that it was exciting to see. 1 Quote
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