incantation Posted May 21 Share Posted May 21 Did the raven cry Her dreams the ones in Which she dialled The sun to light The union of fire, ice And that of hers with Iceland. A bird rests in A forest to test the strength of His Queen's song. His Rain enraptured eyes rise to View the sun, the dreams Of a Queen and that of her Land in flight between fire And ice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry A Posted May 25 Share Posted May 25 Had to look up ‘Fjallkona’ and found the myth to which your poem refers. Powerfully embraced by Iceland, and for reasons that elevate rather than reduce the spirit of a country built on volcanoes and winter. Yet your poem soars beyond those considerations, poetically bringing to life the intensity almost the form of a lucid dream in which the ordinary pales in comparison. One travels on spirit in poems such as this one, so welcome in times where reductive materialism applies too much gravity to thinking. Edited to add; Because good poetry makes one think -On the effects of how myths can flow in the blood of countries, for good or bad. Mostly this poem speaks of a reverence for natural forces that enliven and awaken the senses past the mundane. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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