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Macedonian language- Cyrillic

 

Зумбули

 

1.

Бескраен поглед

врз леа мириси, со лик на зумбули.

 

Ливади -> сонови -> сонце.

Ридови -> горништа -> трње во безредие.

Врв. -> Круна. -> Виделина.

2.

Удолу поглед:

копнеж по зумбули,

сон за леа од мириси.

Врв? - бадијала.

 

Што без зубули???

 

( 15.03.2002 - 1.45 am )

 

Macedonian language - Latin Alphabet

 

Zumbuli

 

1.

Beskraen pogled

vrz lea mirisi, so lik na zumbuli

 

Livadi -> sonovi -> sonce.

Ridovi -> gornishta -> trnje vo bezredie.

Vrv. -> Kruna. -> Vudelina.

2.

Udolu pogled:

kopnez po zumbuli,

son za lea od mirisi.

Vrv? - badijala.

 

Shto bez zumbuli???

 

 

English Version

 

Hyacinths

1.

Endless glance

over the garden bed of

fragrances, with a face of hyacinths.

 

Meadows -> dreams - > sun.

Hills - > uppers - > thorns in disorder...

Crest. - > Crown. - > Daylight...

2.

- Downhill view :

desire for hyacinths,

dream of a bed of fragrances.

Crest? - dirt cheap.

 

What without hyacinths???

 

( 27.08.08 - 1.00 pm)

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Thank you, Alek, for posting both the English and the original (Macedonian) version of this poem here. It excites me that, in addition to being able to speak and write another language, you can also use a different alphabet! icon_biggrin.png I love the way this poem looks on the page -- in both languages and in both alphabets.

 

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Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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Aleksandra

Thank you dear Tony, you made me :).

But you know to use two languages too, or you forget that? icon_smile.gif

 

I am glad that you like this, but don't forget that I did this posting in both language because of your fault icon_smile.gificon_wink.gif

 

I look forward some poems of yours, in more than one language icon_razz.gif

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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  • 5 months later...
Macedonian language- Cyrillic

 

Зумбули

 

1.

Бескраен поглед

врз леа мириси, со лик на зумбули.

 

Ливади -> сонови -> сонце.

Ридови -> горништа -> трње во безредие.

Врв. -> Круна. -> Виделина.

2.

Удолу поглед:

копнеж по зумбули,

сон за леа од мириси.

Врв? - бадијала.

 

Што без зубули???

 

( 15.03.2002 - 1.45 am )

 

Macedonian language - Latin Alphabet

 

Zumbuli

 

1.

Beskraen pogled

vrz lea mirisi, so lik na zumbuli

 

Livadi -> sonovi -> sonce.

Ridovi -> gornishta -> trnje vo bezredie.

Vrv. -> Kruna. -> Vudelina.

2.

Udolu pogled:

kopnez po zumbuli,

son za lea od mirisi.

Vrv? - badijala.

 

Shto bez zumbuli???

 

 

English Version

 

Hyacinths

1.

Endless glance

over the garden bed of

fragrances, with a face of hyacinths.

 

Meadows -> dreams - > sun.

Hills - > uppers - > thorns in disorder...

Crest. - > Crown. - > Daylight...

2.

- Downhill view :

desire for hyacinths,

dream of a bed of fragrances.

Crest? - dirt cheap.

 

What without hyacinths???

 

( 27.08.08 - 1.00 pm)

 

Nice. I can read the Cyrillic, but would love to hear the music and the rhythm. Is the stress more often (though not exclusively) penultimate? Oh, yes! I believe the poem is your own. Or is it?

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Nice!. I presume it is your own. I can read the Cyrillic, but miss the stress/rhythm and the music/word-sound. Is the stress mostly penultimate (but not exclusively so), like in Russian?

 

I am intrigued by those > > marks.

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