No tears, no fears, no light,

[Omar013]

No tears , no fears , no light,
But your heart is gushing sun.
Melancholy tune in the dust
Covered.
And the dreamy tide is foaming
Wishes.
A scent makes the pluses seen,
And every morn a new summer.
Eyes as the ocean deep and life-beating
As lovers'
Not just hoping , but a stinging dream and
Sweaty prayers.
Not a stilling leaf ,but a growing flower.
Glory end and endless nights , a golden
Frame varnishing the meretricious picture.
The seeking of new ,the sight of the bird,
The novel morrow and the spring that borrowed 
 seraphic feathers for his Meadows.
Fangled day for us , unused to sow
Many a colored  rose , many a perfume and
Many more...., forevermore.

[tonyv]

Built-in to this, there is a sense of timelessness that spans cultures and civilizations. You use some heartfelt words and themes that transcend time, that honest humans can relate to: "'sweaty' prayers," the "frame varnishing the 'meretricious' picture," and the "'fangled' day for us." Personally, I can feel it, especially when you round it out with "forevermore."

Omar, this is good work very much to my liking. I know you also posted some topics in the Workshop which I haven't gotten to. I hope to get to them soon.

Tony

[Omar013]

@tonyv thank you very much, glad you felt it.

[David W. Parsley]

HI Omar, I hope it isn't too late to welcome you to the forum.  Glad to have such a fresh, imaginative voice among us.  I found the following lines particularly compelling:

On 11/27/2021 at 2:10 AM, Omar013 said:

No tears , no fears , no light,
But your heart is gushing sun.
. . .
And the dreamy tide is foaming
Wishes.
 . . .
Not just hoping , but a stinging dream and
Sweaty prayers.

 . . .spring that borrowed 
 seraphic feathers for his Meadows.
  . . .

Thanks

 - Dave

[Omar013]

@David W. Parsley thanks for your commentary. I really appreciate the time you spent reading the poem and I am really glad that you liked those lines.