Omar Posted December 26, 2021 Share Posted December 26, 2021 Pulses -one dance- then the stars Can be counted. And space measured could be, all life's petals named will be And my scent in your soul Treasured to be. This is the moon and this is me. The world let be forgotten and me Wrap in your wings. This is our dream and this is the sphere. The hope -under the river buried- Too soon to unhand. You will come walking on the stars, In a dance we shall meet. a movie, but characters. And the whole world seemed Unreal. -Yes my dear! This is me- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted January 1, 2022 Share Posted January 1, 2022 Lovely, lyrical -- romantic and spiritual features intermingle in this enchanting poem. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted January 11, 2022 Share Posted January 11, 2022 I was journeying through the poem mixing technical terms (pulses, stars, space) with nature (petals, scent, wings). It felt surreal, exactly as the poem says "seemed unreal". Thanks Omar013. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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