Omar Posted March 19, 2022 Share Posted March 19, 2022 And I wish you would stop listening, And I would stop talking about everything, Time under the sun would get frozen And life would drowse with the lilies, -And God would stop proceeding- Till the moon stands still. I hope you drown in the breeze To see how tender things could kill you; Soft petals can make you -forever- sleep And Blue eyes fiercely strangle you. soft thorns in your skin pike your dreams, The Wings of butterflies hurl you. And this is the precious ocean That has buried you. As soft as I could be -the lights of the city Subdued- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted March 20, 2022 Share Posted March 20, 2022 Omar, if I could stop listening, I would listen. One of the reasons I don't listen to music often these days is I get too caught up in it: I would get lost, and I wouldn't get anything else "essential" done. So, I don't listen, unless I "fall off the wagon" and can't help it. Lovely poem. Tony 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omar Posted March 21, 2022 Author Share Posted March 21, 2022 @tonyv thanks so much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted April 20, 2022 Share Posted April 20, 2022 This reminds one of Adorno: “… to write poetry after Auschwitz is barbaric.” How powerfully you describe this dilemma of the writing creed: “And I wish you would stop listening, And I would stop talking about everything . . .” How ironic that we continue to write even when all seem so hopeless. Poignant and beautiful, Omar. goldenlangur 1 1 Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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