Tinker Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 Explore the Craft of WritingAfrican Verse The Utendi or Untenzi (Swahili meaning deed or act) is a Swahili stanzaic form that I first found at Vole Central that is a Zejel without the Mudanza. The form is usually a narrative and should tell a story. Swahili epics appear in this form. The elements of the Utendi are: African Poetic Genres and Forms a narrative. stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains. syllabic, 8 syllable lines. rhymed, rhyme aaab cccb dddb etc. The b rhyme is a linking rhyme between stanzas. example from Vita Vya Wadachi Part 12: Stanzas 1 & 2 Utenzi wa Vita vya Wadachi Kutamalaki Mrima BISMILLAHI Ghaghara alWahidi - lKahari mwinyi kuhui shajari na jinni na insiya Yu pweke ARRAHAMANI wala hayuko wa thani mruzuku duniani ila ni yeye mmoya The German Conquest of the Swahili Coast IN THE NAME OF GOD, the Forgiving, the One, the Dominant, the giver of life to plants, to spirits and to mankind. He is alone THE COMPASSIONATE, there is none other that provides for the world but Him alone. Devil's Bridge A devil's pact as it is told, he'd help build a bridge, for first soul to traverse the viaduct bold. So goes the ancient folk story. Strong bodies and masons of stone with fieldstone and hard granite honed, cut and fit rock, worked to the bone. A labor from hell to glory Once done, the devised, dry-stone span arched over the river as planned, now for the payback of one man. Who will be consiliatory? A goat is baited by thrown bread to step upon the bridge instead. the devil raged, he was misled. in the end, complicitory. Today the arched stone bridge still stands, a testament to grit and bands of like minded folks joining hands. Out witting the signatory. ~~Judi Van Gorder Dec 18, 2018 Insult Poetry Mawaddes Muyaka Praise Poem Qe'ne Shairi Takhmis Utendi ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts