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Delight in despair

still mesmerized sitting on a shore

tears glitter like pearls

 

 

tears glitter like pearls

praying, please put down

your bloody gun

 

 

 

Glad to meet you, Rony. icon_smile.gif

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tears glitter like pearls

praying, please put down

your bloody gun

 

 

 

Glad to meet you, Rony. icon_smile.gif

 

236907.gif glad to meet you too.....but i don't know: does haiku speak for modern world or not.....but i like this work.

 

Your bloody gun

Roars for the truth

Never heard before!

 

 

Rony in melancholy

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Your bloody gun

Roars for the truth

Never heard before!

 

"Never heard before."

Anyone can help? Watch your

5-7-5 step.

 

 

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Lake is in party mood! icon_cheers.png98389.gif

 

Lake wrote:

 

"Never heard before."

Anyone can help? Watch your

5-7-5 step.

 

 

I urge:

 

5-7-5 step

Dancing on the floor

Victory we shout, justice we adore!

 

 

 

 

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Aleksandra
5-7-5 step

Dancing on the floor

Victory we shout, justice we adore!

 

 

Victory we shout, justice we adore!

for us, for you, for me.

- death for betrayers.

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Hi Alek!

 

i don't what this haiku becomes, may be it's a revolution call for the socialists and i am getting the old fragrance of my childhood where i would die for the socialist's idealism or Lenin's optimism!

 

 

Aleksandra wrote:

 

Victory we shout, justice we adore!

for us, for you, for me.

- death for betrayers.

 

 

-death for betrayers

so march on comrades

for a new land to call home

 

RoNy!

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Hi Alek!

 

i don't what this haiku becomes, may be it's a revolution call for the socialists and i am getting the old fragrance of my childhood where i would die for the socialist's idealism or Lenin's optimism!

 

 

Aleksandra wrote:

 

Victory we shout, justice we adore!

for us, for you, for me.

- death for betrayers.

 

 

-death for betrayers

so march on comrades

for a new land to call home

 

RoNy!

 

 

Hi Rony. May be you are right. When I read it my own haiku, then I felt and said, even to Tony : " hey this is socialistic or communistic " icon_biggrin.png I felt that way, maybe because I grown in socialistic country.

 

So let's go with haiku now icon_smile.gif

 

For a new land to call home.

You stole my motherland.

- Don't steal my name!

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Hail Hitlar! 236907.gif

 

 

 

let's move to the west to claim our victory lol.gif

 

Aleksandra wrote:

 

For a new land to call home.

You stole my motherland.

- Don't steal my name!

 

 

 

 

Don’t steal my name

Listen to the thunder rain

Blazing sun smiles over black wet land

 

 

RoNy

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Don't steal my name

Listen to the thunder rain

Blazing sun smiles over black wet land

 

 

RoNy

 

Blazing sun smiles

over black wet land.

Apparitions evaporate.

 

icon_biggrin.png Rony, I only have one line, so I cut your last line into two. Hope you don't mind.

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Apparitions evaporate

where the sun does not shine

in nightly dreams!

 

 

where is goldenlangur? anybody heard from him lately. i miss him/her. i don't know if this person is female or male lol.

 

great short poems and haikus everyone.

victor

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Apparitions evaporate

where the sun does not shine

in nightly dreams!

 

 

where is goldenlangur? anybody heard from him lately. i miss him/her. i don't know if this person is female or male lol.

 

great short poems and haikus everyone.

victor

 

No Victor I haven't heard from GL lately. I hope Golden is fine, and will show up soon. I miss him / her too.

 

in nightly dreams!

I see all angels

- and you above.

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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and you above

Milky Way in the middle

but me below

 

 

 

But me below

watching you behind the herbs

hair propagates reckless!

 

 

 

Lake, whatever you do, just do it again, cause your work makes the Haiku train insane icon_biggrin.pngicon_clown.pngaffraid.gif

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But me below

watching you behind the herbs

hair propagates reckless!

 

hair propagates reckless

on his chin over the night-

unrecognizable.

 

 

 

Hope I didn't derail the train.

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But me below

watching you behind the herbs

hair propagates reckless!

 

hair propagates reckless

on his chin over the night-

unrecognizable.

 

 

 

Hope I didn't derail the train.

 

 

unrecognizable

after all this time

your voice

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Aleksandra
unrecognizable

after all this time

your voice

 

 

goldenlangur

 

your voice

and your face,

- icon for me

 

 

GL how happy I am to see you back in our land icon_cheers.png

WB my friend. Your seat on the train was empty, but it remained reserved icon_smile.gif

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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unrecognizable

after all this time

your voice

 

 

goldenlangur

 

your voice

and your face,

- icon for me

 

 

GL how happy I am to see you back in our land icon_cheers.png

WB my friend. Your seat on the train was empty, but it remained reserved icon_smile.gif

 

Aleksandra

 

 

- icon for me,

icon for everybody -

our golden sun.

 

Welcome back, golden. Thanks for taking the train back on track, I almost derailed it - it was running insane, Rony said. icon_biggrin.png

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- icon for me,

icon for everybody -

our golden sun.

 

Welcome back, golden. Thanks for taking the train back on track, I almost derailed it - it was running insane, Rony said. icon_biggrin.png

 

 

 

Nice to see Langur! icon_lol.gif

 

Our golden sun

Breeze speaks over paddy bed

-A Green ocean flows apart

 

 

Actually Lake injected some revolutionary moode in Haiku whereas our village pictures are not very much aware of it! perhaps, it can be said a fusion, i guess, which is very bright and that's he has the ability to dismantle the environment in limeric moode.

 

And some time diversity is essential to move on!

 

rOnY

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goldenlangur
- icon for me,

icon for everybody -

our golden sun.

 

Welcome back, golden. Thanks for taking the train back on track, I almost derailed it - it was running insane, Rony said. icon_biggrin.png

 

 

 

Nice to see Langur! icon_lol.gif

 

Our golden sun

Breeze speaks over paddy bed

-A Green ocean flows apart

 

 

Actually Lake injected some revolutionary moode in Haiku whereas our village pictures are not very much aware of it! perhaps, it can be said a fusion, i guess, which is very bright and that's he has the ability to dismantle the environment in limeric moode.

 

And some time diversity is essential to move on!

 

rOnY

 

Well said Rony! icon_smile.gif Diversity challenges and pushes our boundaries. And thank you for your warm welcome! Not at all Lake - you posted a haiku which certainly touched a chord. Glad to be back, Aleksandra after my accident. I'll hobble back to normality icon_wink.gif

 

a green ocean flows apart

our worlds

in ether we meet

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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in ether we meet

you hobble, I wobble

laughing heartily

 

 

 

What a brilliant response, Lake icon_smile.gif Love the humor icon_biggrin.png

 

laughing heartily

we board

the haiku train icon_smile.gif

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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laughing heartily

we board

the haiku train icon_smile.gif

 

 

goldenlangur

 

 

the haiku train

Darkens the rhythmic sky

a cloud shy .

 

 

 

 

rOnY

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the haiku train

Darkens the rhythmic sky

a cloud shy .

 

 

rOnY

 

a cloud shy

seeing two lovers

under the moonlight

 

 

Thanks Golden, inspired by your hobbling return. icon_smile.gif

Rony, does this one sound more Haiku?

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a cloud shy

seeing two lovers

under the moonlight

 

 

Thanks Golden, inspired by your hobbling return. icon_smile.gif

Rony, does this one sound more Haiku?

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Lake, as much as i know, i don't know what haiku is! 236907.gif

But i think in village lovers do more than sitting beside in moolit night. actually you can say this is pick hour of romance 735647.giflol.gif

so poem is nothing but imagination translated through words and haiku is something like that but more in the aspect of Village life!

 

so carry on dude!

 

Under the moonlight

Skeleton tree resides in nocturnal mind

like Scare crow finds a lonely smile

 

 

 

RoNy

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Under the moonlight

Skeleton tree resides in nocturnal mind

like Scare crow finds a lonely smile

 

 

 

like Scarecrow finds a lonely smile

he looks into the mirror

a lone reflection

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like Scarecrow finds a lonely smile

he looks into the mirror

a lone reflection

 

a lone reflection

covered my face.

a blind copy of love.

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Aleksandra
a blind copy of love

goes recycled and

then reproduced.

 

then reproduced.

And recycled again.

- Circle in order

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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then reproduced.

And recycled again.

- Circle in order

 

Circle in order

ripples from the core -

the nebula

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
the nebula

fogs my brain

a black hole abides

 

I should have prefaced my response with a nod to your wonderful poem in the forum, Tony icon_smile.gif So glad you've posted this a great response icon_biggrin.png

 

a black hole abides

behind the veil -

another universe

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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the nebula

fogs my brain

a black hole abides

 

I should have prefaced my response with a nod to your wonderful poem in the forum, Tony icon_smile.gif So glad you've posted this a great response icon_biggrin.png

 

a black hole abides

behind the veil -

another universe

 

Very well my friends icon_smile.gif. I love how the work goes here.

 

another universe

another life.

Show me the Milky Way.

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Very well my friends icon_smile.gif. I love how the work goes here.

 

another universe

another life.

Show me the Milky Way.

 

 

icon_smile.gificon_smile.gificon_smile.gif

 

show me the Milky Way

not just its astral presence

but where does it lead?

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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show me the Milky Way

not just its astral presence

but where does it lead?

 

“But where does it lead?”

asked the deaf

to the blind.

 

This is awful. icon_redface.gif I'll try again.

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"But where does it lead?"

asked the deaf

to the blind.

 

This is awful. icon_redface.gif I'll try again.

 

 

Not at all, Lake icon_smile.gif

 

 

to the blind

the world opens at their

fingertips

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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fingertips

do my walking

i dance on keyboard

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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fingertips

do my walking

i dance on keyboard

 

 

I dance on keyboard,

black and white my favorite,

just like yin and yang.

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goldenlangur
I dance on keyboard,

black and white my favorite,

just like yin and yang.

 

just like yin and yang

the cat and the dog doze -

late autumn noon

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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just like yin and yang

the cat and the dog doze -

late autumn noon

 

goldenlangur

 

late autumn noon

in the swirl of falling leaves

bleak as winter moon

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late autumn noon

in the swirl of falling leaves

bleak as winter moon

 

 

 

bleak as winter moon

this waiting for your

call

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
fades away

dreams so sour

my worst nightmare!

 

 

Haiku train is in full pace, DUDE lol.gif

 

We do seem to be chugging away happily icon_biggrin.png

 

my worst nightmare

not remembering

your face

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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your face

glitters -

fireflies at night

 

 

Fabulous image, Lake icon_smile.gif

 

fireflies at night

trace your footsteps -

in dreams

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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fireflies at night

trace your footsteps -

in dreams

 

 

Thanks Golden. After you. icon_smile.gif

 

in dreams

my tears

wet the pillowcase

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in dreams

my tears

wet the pillowcase

 

Your responses are always brilliant, Lake icon_smile.gif A pleasure to follow you icon_smile.gificon_smile.gif

 

wet the pillowcase

each waxing moon

in silence

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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